[One last bit, then we’ll drop this story and move on.]
The old shop keeper, chin planted firmly on his chest, frowned theatrically at THIS THING. Frowned as if it was a relation who had wronged him somehow. Perhaps a son who had shamed him in some unforgivable way.
Then the bald man – – yes, still frowning – – bit into his lower lip with his espresso-hued incisors. He glared at his visible affliction – – as if it were not an oversized and neglected hernia at all but a symbol of his own mortality. Suddenly, he lifted the hair-covered back of his hand. Didn’t strike, but only lifted the hand, while frowning, while still biting his lower lip. Lifted it just above the hernia.
The old man, I realized, was menacing THIS THING, threatening to strike it in a familial and Old World sort of way.
Also published on Medium.
Hope you are doing well old friend. Love the stories
Hey Scott,
It made my day when I found out you had posted a story again! You have the ability to make even the most simplest things interesting and funny. Hope you stick with it and post more stories!
You are kind to say that! I love to write. Mostly, I feel like a failure when I do it. Still, I KEEP DOING IT. Thank you! -Scott